Holiday Writing Sample

This Morning we had 40mins to write about anything we wanted. From this we are going to set some writing goals for the term. Here is was I Wrote.

The highlight of my holiday was everything, From Gaming to Pools and also Outdoor activities. I stay up at night often because Gaming keeps me Entertained for a while. I loved going pools and enjoying the fun with my Friends and Cousins.

Also I like playing outside because there's always something fun to do. My daily routine was just breakfast pool then gaming when I come back home for some reason.

I was happy because the holidays were just kicking off. Sometimes I sleep in the middle of the day because its always too Hot or to cold for anything. I always have to do chores to play game or do anything fun like doing jobs like  the dishes & cleaning the lounge but I got no pocket money, only the 50c I found on the Ground.

 Sadly I never got to go visit my Nan’s House,which is awful but thats life.

The holidays were a bit boring because I wanted to go school and I couldn't wait to come. I Most loved cooking food for the family, Under supervision. Sadly the holidays were coming to an end and I had to start Sleeping early now to get good sleep for school.

That’s My Holiday Writing Sample….

My goal this term in writing is to use metephors, and similes and also to add alot of effective paragraphs, and sentences. I want to get better at my writing because im a bit below in my age. Last but not least I need a Hook so people could understand it.

My Math Goal for this Term.

The thing that I'm focusing on is the numerator and the denominator. Like if there was 64 pens and I wanted 3-8's of it. So I made Eight groups then  put eight in each of them, but I want only 3 of it so, 3x8=24, it's very simple and You should have a try, ask your teacher if your still in school. I want to get better at this. And thats my math goal for this term.:)

Movie reflection.

In week 4, we made movies about love and in our Literacy group, we had to reflect on the movie we watched. There is a link to the movie If you would like to watch it Here --> https://vimeo.com/72608093



The thing that I liked about the movie that it was an olden day vibe but it wasn’t black and white. The other thing that I liked about the movie is that it was a comedy/Action movie and that was very good planning. And lastly the last one that I liked is that it had a Barney bit in it. plus I like that the actors were awesome and were expressive about what they meant.

But the stuff I didn't like is that it had no sound at the beginning. And that it had not that much sound in it, they should’ve added some voice into it, plus they should’ve changed the music in the background but the music was awesome. Overall I rate it a good movie and that it was a Comedian-Action Movie.

My goal next term.

My goal for next term, is to move up into division in 2 second and to get better at co-operating with others and to get much much better at writing and reading. Lastly I want to improve in my Behaviour.

Movie Making Reflection

Yellow Hat - The things I enjoyed

Making the song and hanging out with my friends.

Also when we were making the Animation.

Black Hat - Which things didn’t I like.

I Never liked it when Isiah Kicked me out of the group

I Never liked it when Isiah said we were going to film some parts but we never did.

Green Hat - What was something interesting about this week

The Interesting thing was when I got lot’s of stuff done

I did not get trouble that much.

White Hat - What did I learn.

I learnt more about the Instrument’s on Garage band.

Also I learnt about co-operating with other’s

Blue Hat - What can I do better next time.

Cooperate and get a bit more stuff Done

Also get better at drawing picture’s

Story Board Template.

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