This is a record of my learning from Pt England school through to Tamaki College.
Hello Antonio your story is cool.I like the way you set up your story .Your images were helpful.You could improve on is that you put more detail on your writing. Keep up the good work.
Hello Antonio your story is cool.I like the way you set up your story .Your images were helpful.You could improve on is that you put more detail on your writing.
ReplyDeleteKeep up the good work.